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Oh my gosh, congratulations for finishing the game ❤️❤️

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Thank you! Are you going to play it now that it's done? I loved seeing your feedback during the development. ^w^

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Hello, I haven't been active in this website for a year because I've been busy with my college,just few time looking. It's my free time the other day, so I logged in. Coincidentally, the first thing I see is an update for this. I was like, "Wow, I feel lucky that the full game is out when I decided to surf again." I immediately downloaded it. I'm glad that my last saves are still there.


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I really like the music you put in the main menu. I stayed there for a whole 5 minutes. I noticed you added a gallery, finally! The CGs I've been waiting for, haha. I played it all over again and I'm surprised that someone talked. Like, there's a fully voiced for them all (ノ*0*)ノAshley's voice is a bit deeper than I imagined. Saito's voice is playful. Malachi, on the other hand, is flirty, bwaa. In my opinion, the BGM is a bit loud during their first confrontation? (It's adjustable in settings, so it's okay, and I could still hear their voices clearly) I miss Malachi's blush, Ashley's smile, and that frown Saito has (づ>/////<)づ Omg, what's with the "come here, kitty"? I really giggle and have my heart skip a beat. It really hits different with audio in it. I really love that you animate their mouths when speaking. I can see their pokey teeth, haha. 

I chose Malachi first, (all along I thought his name was "ma-la-chi" but it's "ma-la-kai" (づ_ど) ) He's still this flirty but easily flustered guy, haha. I swear, I really called him cute multiple times! He's really sweet, and his teasing is just ₍ᐢ._.ᐢ₎♡༘ During that beach scene (the sound of rain is a bit louder than his voice, so I adjusted the music), Malachi is such a softy. I know he's pushing us away because he doesn't want us to get hurt... man! I was surprised by those CGs. I like his voice when he speaks softly. I also like that he loves art. Why is he blushing after taking off his shirt? ૮꒰ ˶> ༝ <˶꒱ა staph! I literally feel my cheeks blush the moment he does his move, but haha, he's so cute when flustered. That peppy girl is cheeky, and I like her. She let me see the childish side of Malachi, that's so adorable! Gosh, Idk how many times I described him cute ( ՞ ܸ. .ܸ՞ )

Daisuke, my cutiepie! He really grew fond of me. For someone who has similar taste, I feel like I focus on him more than Malachi, lmao. That gentle look and tone is જ⁀➴♡. I'm eating a croissant when he offered MC a drink, it felt like I'm really drinking a tea (one I choose) with him across the screen. He surprised me when he spoke that line with an accent cuz I didn't understand it for a sec. ('^' ?) Idk if it's intentional or not, but it could be some trick in the game. Daisuke's mood affects me when Malachi just ran off, now we're both worried about him. He's so cute with glasses, no wonder someone fainted when they saw him wearing it. I'm really glad that he was there to calm Malachi after being overwhelmed by his anger. I was surprised to see him like a sneaky patootie *cough* finding something upstairs (I actually didn't pursue this one cuz' it looks dangerous and I reload again to choose the safest for my first try). Gosh, after hearing Itami's explanation, all I can say is, no wonder he knows a lot and learning about special blood, prophecy and stuff is because he's a big boss himself! You really gave me a big surprise there. I didn't expect that.

I actually forgot that Itami's a lieutenant! I remember it was not mentioned before or maybe I just remember it wrong. Before playing, I predicted that this guy will use his dominant power to hypnotize a lot of people under his knees cuz' he's a final boss. Guess that one is correct if he can control them. Itami sure has a husky British accent and also an arrogant tone. It fits him with that noble etiquette. You did a good job writing Itami's lines; they truly sound like a villain.(Actually, all their lines n the plotline was well written) MC's bravery is worth mentioning when she confronted him for Malachi. Itami, u sadist! How dare you hit them ;-; although I admit that he's attractive IF you remove the sadist persona lol. Okay, I was actually expecting his whip but he.... looks gentle. I also had the same reaction with MC but when you hear what he said in a calm tone is just. Is this guy for real?! So I'm kinda right bout the love interests to be a hitman. Poor thing, they didn't know the target is innocent. The way he explains things, man just trying to throw ourselves into a trap. No wonder he's being gentle. It's really suspicious! But what he said is correct; things are complicated between the sire and which side to fight for.

I really like Ashley, on how much he was worried about us and offering help when we need it. He's there to comfort and give advice. Come on, who wouldn't fall for those blushes? I remember you saying that he's really protective in other routes, and yeah, just look at Melachi's route. He becomes so moody the moment he thought we almost/got hurt. (I always pick the most pacifist choices cuz' I kinda have an idea what he will do if he knew) He's such a gentleman. While doing Malachi's route, he does look like a character that says, "You give me light, now I will do anything to make you safe."

It's actually my first time hearing Tsuna, I guess he/she appeared in other routes.

I really love that soft piano in this route. Could you tell me what the piece is called? I haven't heard all of the Characters but from what I heard so far in Malachi's route, they really did a great job and efforr for it .𖥔 ݁  But seriously, this feels nostalgic for me. It grows fond since I've played it in the demo and seeing it done really makes me happy.

I haven't played other routes yet, but I will in my free time. Sorry for the late reply, again. I just finished revising our thesis, lol. The mystery is my cup of tea, and curiosity is pushing me too.

I have a few questions though. Can I still play Malachi's route after it disappeared by loading the save, or do I need to download the game again? About the ending of each route, I remember you mentioned that they're gonna have three bad endings each, is it still correct? Then they have one ending before jumping to other?

P.S. I'm really thankful that you answered my questions during the development stage. I also love it too! I actually didn't expect this to be long just for a single route ૮꒰ ˶> ༝ <˶꒱ა I'm actually writing notes while playing the game. I should have just summarized it.

Im silently asking if Daisuke have route, even if its not in this game.

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Thank you for your review!

Sorry about the default settings, the sliders got moved around a lot while testing, so just adjust the volumes until you're comfortable. 🩷

There are plans for Daisuke to have a route, but it likely won't be voiced. Same with Itami, as any DLC will take a while to record audio for and I've already taken up a lot of the VA's time. 😅

In order to play the routes, you should start the game, then skip to the character choice. Each route will tell you when it ends, then return you to the choice screen. 😊

I believe they do still have three bad endings, yes. Though one in Malachi's doesn't technically end, it forces you to make a different choice.

Tsuna is a girl, Itami's maid, and she's actually voiced by me. 🤭

Saito's kitty lines make me melt too, I love him so much. His VA is lovely to work with, all the VAs are. (⁠ᵔ⁠ᴥ⁠ᵔ⁠)

Yeah, finally got a gallery! Took a bit to get working, but I was determined. 😋

The line with an accent is me being silly, if you recognised it at all, it's a parody of a Cockney accent. 🤭

Itami is like a cat. He may look soft, but get too close and you'll get his claws. 👀

A route with him would likely end in death, similar vibes to Fairytale. 😅

I do need to find credit for the music, it's been that long that I don't recall where I got it from, but I'm planning to look it up.

The creator said I don't need to credit them, but I do intend to. ^w^

Honestly, this long is amazing, keep it coming. I want to hear your thoughts on all the routes! 🥰

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I'm glad, I finished all the routes the other day (though I haven't read all the dialogue as I always get their ending on the first try lol) I choose Ashley next as he's the yandere *smirk* I laugh when the two other boys look at us with pity. Same reaction with Mc when he just snitches us to Itami. I love how responsible and caring he is. Did he get the tendency because he has formed this protectiveness as the oldest to keep the younger ones safe? He's a yandere willing to remove any hindrance in his way, but it's understandable, especially after knowing his POV and the secret behind the world. He might sometimes be repulsive but careful too. You almost got me during their confrontation with Daisuke if I didn't read Malachi's first because I'd think the same as Ashley. I am a bit sad he needs to kill us for misunderstanding. I mean, why would we wear it on a broad day anyway xD He's so cunning, and I LOVE IT! I thought both of them were close, even if it's not that close like with Malachi, but they're pretty much strangers to each other. I had a good impression of Legato when he appeared. When Ashley mentioned the "lover," I wondered if he jumped to a conclusion so fast because I haven't heard any confession yet, but considering that "they" are aware of the loop, it might be because of that. It's a bit of a pity that his route is short, but I get it due to how possessive he is. He took the confinement to the next level, ack.

I chose Saito last as his route is the longest. In his route, you could understand everything. It's a good choice for me to make him last. He's so cold during our first interaction, but he's playful if you get to know him. I love seeing his smug and mischievous smile like a prideful cat despite calling us kitten. Throughout his route, he got my attention more than the other two. He's so straight to the point, and his blush is adorable. It gave me mixed feelings that he tried not to show he was hurt and remained calm. Itami's hit just uck, that sounds so painful (I experienced it too but with a teacher before she was reported of abusing children so I get it) He sounds professional if not slacking, putting the egg in the dishwasher, and the fact that the restaurant mismanagement, lol. The way he teases makes me smile widely, and I like the confidence he has. He lightens the mood with a tease, and he looks seductive with the fang blood. I gonna be honest the way he flirts is so fluttering. Why your so good at it >///< When I saw that he was "killed" by Saito, it was too good to be true since I knew there was progress in how to successfully defeat him.I didn't see the easter egg when the mark name appeared. You got me reversed in Chujitsuna; I thought she was also a sadist and a villainess not until Antonio appeared. Reuben is so cute, especially when he rushed to hug Saito tight.

Now I have a few questions: In Saito's route, it was said that Itami planned to adopt 7 children. Let's say 3 of them are Saito, Malachi, and Ashley. Then the other 3 are Daisuke, Legato, and Tsuna. Who's the 7th? Is it Reuben? But he came much later, so I'm thinking it's not him. It is also said that people who are aware of the world are probably real people; it reminds me of Itami as he broke the 4th wall a bunch of times. I thought that maybe he's also from the real world lol but I'm probably sure he's an aware NPC as he can do coding like AI. I'm really glad that Daisuke and Itami will have their own story. I noticed it actually when Itami said he's gonna kill all of them except Tsuna and said "come here" and her interaction with Daisuke. omg so cute! Could it be Tsuna will be the protagonist with Itami and Daisuke as the next love interest? Ah, I've fallen for Daisuke even more with how smooth he is in there. Oh, btw. I also want to ask how we met Ashley in real life like is he a senpai or something? 

p.s. oh gosh, you have a cute voice >3< no wonder it sounds a bit different but I thought they're from the same VA! that's good hiding there XD

Thank you for the wonderful experience of the game. I'm looking forward to your upcoming projects. I also took a look and noticed that "Fairytale" is now completed, so I'll go hop there next.

Well, Ashley is overprotective to the point of obsession because he's seen MC die many times and he was powerless to stop it. He believes that if he takes control of them, he can take control of the situation and keep them alive. Ah, Daisuke in Ashley's route is incredibly cautious. He believes in the idea that if he doesn't kill a vampire, it'll kill him. He's beyond reason there, but he's a lot calmer in the other routes. Daisuke and Malachi are best friends in Malachi's route, but in Ashley's route, they don't even know each other. In Saito's route, they hate each other. The dynamics change with each route, so it's not just the same story from different perspectives. 

Which Easter Egg were you looking for? There are several. ^w^

The seven children are indeed, Saito, Malachi, Ashley, Daisuke, Tsuna, and Legato. The missing child is Ayame, who in passing, is under the code name Vivace at Caesura. You see her alongside Tsuna in Saito's route when Daisuke's having him taken to the cells. 

Ashley is our senpai, yes. He's older than Saito and Malachi, and it's implied he's older than MC too, which is why they're seen as acting immature when he's the rational one. 

Although I do plan to do a route for Daisu and Itami, it may not happen for some time. 

I'll try my best, though. ^-^

You think my voice is cute? >w<

Thank you. ♥

I'm no VA myself, but I tried my best. ^.^

Fairytale is indeed completed, and I'd love to hear your views on that too!

Celestial,

Great job with this game! The storylines are really interesting. It is visually very appealing, and you did a fantastic job casting the various character voices. Of course, I'm just a tad partial to Itami's voice actor, since I'm a huge fan of Akushi. Congratulations on finishing this and a job well done!

Commom

Thank you so much, Commom! It's amazing to see you here, and not only be able to talk with you about my scripts, but my VN too. 🩷


It means a lot to me, I really appreciate it. (⁠ノ⁠◕⁠ヮ⁠◕⁠)⁠ノ⁠*⁠.⁠✧

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Okay okay... you got me hooked so far it's a 10/10 lolz sorry I sound sick.

This is really interesting

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Thank you!

Where have you got up to? Like I said in the description, Saito has a whole route, but I'm still working on Malachi's. :3

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Hello, how are you? I'm sorry if it's a bit late. I didn't expect my professors to suddenly give me a bunch of stuff to do. I just finished them all, and all I need to do is take an exam tomorrow and the next week.

 

 

 

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I also enjoyed this one. The bgm in the menu is my taste and you put a good bgm that fit the scenarios. I like it, like the soft yet lovely sound after you choose Malachi. I stayed in there for a while to listen (๑♡⌓♡๑) The plot idea itself is interesting and I'm looking for more. Curiosity really leads you to trouble (≧▽≦) the moment Raven Boy Saito suddenly appeared suprised me, I feel like Im the one who got caught and the way he grin ◉‿◉ he look confident and I like it. I didn't expect the hypnotise haha. Azurette Boy Ashley, the serious type is cute even if he frown hehe what more if he smile (人 •͈ᴗ•͈) Ability to detect emotion is not bad. Redhead Boy Malachi, he look gentle and friendly, I actually have a feeling he's a teasing or a shy type when I saw him. So his power is hunting huh, nice. Daisuke is cute too! He's kind,patient, and considerate (⸝⸝⸝´꒳`⸝⸝⸝) we both have a sweet tooth ꒰⑅ᵕ༚ᵕ꒱˖♡ and also the love for animals ฅ^•ﻌ•^ฅ Its cute that they gave the MC a animal name. A kitten, mouse, and rabbit. I really thought at first they were a professional hitman but then suddenly the "human" is mentioned, and I was like, "Will this one turn to supernatural and they're a demon/vampire or smthg." And it's actually correct. I see that you use japanese term of special for MC. I like their sprites ( ꈍᴗꈍ) I first choose Malachi, why he's sweet 🤭 he's also a gentleman. I love the scene where he caught MC into his arm when she was about to fall. My heart flattered. Is that a blush I see?! He's romantic. I'm surprised on Itami's sprite. I really thought he's the one from Fairytale... is he? ◖⚆ᴥ⚆◗from what I remember, did he call MC a toy/plaything? He sure a sadist.... I didnt expect he broke the 4th wall. Wow Daisuke have a cult, I mean teaching stuffs about vampires to those who's interested in occult. I kinda laugh when it mentioned about a guy fainted cuz of Daisuki wearing a glass. I also want to join (✪㉨✪) Ashley.... I got a bad feeling when his eyes suddenly have eyebags like.... Dang, I was right.... I didnt... Wahh he's a yan? He have a tendency if he's not. (・o・;) is it because of MC's blood? Nani nani?! You sure left it hanging on the exciting part (≧▽≦) I thought it ended there but there's a much longer in other option. It's interesting concept of MC's power. 

 

I haven't start Saito's route unfortunately, I know it will be much longer as it is completed and I dont have much free time for the mean but I'll try it soon. I wonder how many ending does each route supposed to have? I saw that you mentioned there is 5 endings in the current version. Are they all in Saito or there is in Malachi's current route version?? If you count the one in the death, there is three ending in Malachi's current version. I cant wait to see Ashley's and Malachi's complete route (☆▽☆) also, do you have a plan to make Daisuke's route? Also.... Itami *cough cough*

I'm good, thank you, and absolutely loved reading your review. ^-^

Good luck on your exam!

I'm glad you like the music, sometimes I spend hours deciding what themes fit the situations, and it's lovely to know that that pays off. Hehe, you got me, that is indeed the Japanese word for special. I like sneaking Japanese words into my VNs. :3

Itami's sprite is indeed the one from Fairytale. ^-^

When I thought about who was best to play a yandere prince, Itami came to mind, because of his clothing and his ability to shift between soft and chaotic expressions. XD

He called MC a toy, yes. Everyone is a toy to him. ^^;

Ah yes, Daisuke's cult. :3

You'll find out more about that in Saito's route, the intention of the stories is that the characters shift in personality with each iteration, but you get to learn the story around them. ^w^

Ashley is indeed a yandere, and I'm so glad that came across, because when I first painted his eye bags on, it looked more like he was wearing make up than ready to slay someone. XD

He's very protective of MC in other people's routes, so I feel he's going to be quite intense in his own. :3

5 bad endings in total, two in Malachi's route, three in Saito's. ^-^

Daisuke's route is coming, I'm planning to have it unlock once all the vampire boys have had their routes played. :P

Itami? O.O

You want to romance the sadist? :o

No judgment here, he's pretty attractive and it'd certainly be exciting. :3

I think I will add Itami's route. ;P

Reading that makes me happy. Thank you for the cheer (人 •͈ᴗ•͈) got a perfect score in my exam earlier (๑♡⌓♡๑). Im more eager to play Saito when you mention that (~ ̄³ ̄)~ looking forward for Ashley ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)  I just really like yandere (。•̀ᴗ-)✧ Well, adding another one isn't that bad and Itami really is attractive, the way he talk in Malachi's route is just.... ⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄-⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄ If we just only forget he's abusive (>0<;)  never want to date a sadist in rl though haha. Wait, how old is Ruden (if I remember his name correctly) Daisuke mentioned him as the next adopted after him.  If he's in a datable age, is he counted in the future romantic interest? Hihi ꒰⑅ᵕ༚ᵕ꒱˖♡ 

So is the fairytale and crescendo a different dimension? 

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Congratulations, that's awesome! (⁠ノ⁠◕⁠ヮ⁠◕⁠)⁠ノ⁠*⁠.⁠✧

Itami is a villain I love to hate, he's always playing some kind of mind games. 🤭

Considering you mentioned the death earlier, I take it you answered the door? 😋

Reuben is about 14, 15, he's the youngest of them all. 😌

Saito is 24, Malachi's 23, Ashley's 26, Itami's in his thousands but stopped aging at about 32. 😋

Daisuke is 22, and I can't tell you the ages of the others until you meet them. 🤭

The Fairytale and Crescendo are different dimensions, yes.

Itami and the prince could perhaps be twins, but they're not the same person. 😛

Its a great game i love it 

Thank you! I'm actually updating the whole thing right now, new sprites, animations, and new content. 💕

😁😁😁😁 yesss cant wait